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10 March 2009 @ 10:06 pm
Seven Deadly Sins Challenge  
My first drabble ever.  Hope it doesn't suck.
I chose Pride.

Summary: Chloe sees Jack for the first time on Day 7.

Her heart skipped a beat when she saw him. He did that to her every time. Her words seemed meaningless as they left her mouth, yet the tone of his reply assured her they weren't. The look on his face told her he probably knew, and she hoped he did, because she would never tell him. She would never admit to the endless hours of worrying, the countless nights spent crying and the emptiness she felt every time he walked away. She would never tell him these things. She had already given him everything she had, and it wasn't enough.


 
 
 
niwalkerniwalker on March 31st, 2009 04:19 am (UTC)
I'm late to post a reply but wanted to say this was GREAT! I totally buy this being what Chloe has thought over the years about Jack.
Jodi: Mary Lynn Gunsjr_jackgrl on March 31st, 2009 11:01 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
It's kind of a downer. This season is killing Chlack for me. It's so clear now more than ever that it will never happen, and frankly, it pisses me off. I think any fanfic I write from this point on will be pure angst.